by Sylvia Sep 13, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A withered old man sits beside the bed, |
by NightFlyer
A heart-wrenching moment you've portrayed so beautifully here. Your poem fills me with compassion and sadness for this old couple, holding onto their happy memories as time is swifty running out. |
by Gasttlee
This was telling a heartfelt story of love and bearing the pain of loss. Beautiful writing. |
by Meena Krish
When a couple lives together for a very long |
by Lady Nik
The first line was gold. After that I knew I was reading a great poem. Everyone says it's sad and indeed it is but the way you wrote this is simply beautiful. There is no other word to describe. I loved it :) Keep up the amazing work. Nik |
Beautiful poem, very nicely written. I could see the man crying right in front of my eyes. |