Wrathful. This is one intense poems you got here. It's awesome.

Really powerful piece. Good job. 5/5, Em x

This was a very insightful piece and near the end more haunting. I felt like in the beginning stanza's you lightly told of the earth's destruction, just to get it started. And then your words started getting heavier and more intense. I really was striked when you were writng about the children in the hole's, diggin their own grave, that others had helped them do. That was thought-provoking and prominent. Good for you though, you need this powerful piece to show the others that we need to unite and love, not throw our children out into this world without care and support. A power-filled message, great work!

~MaryAnne

I like the message of this poem... I hope everybody will awake the hero in their hearts to rescue such little poor angels. This piece is full of sympathy and love...God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-