I liked this the first time I read and I like it alot more now. Flawless, 5/5. Em x

Emma said it best, flawless :) I love how you end this "your heart" That's perfect! Who would think of such a clever way to wrap up a poem. This was beautiful and complex, but with easy to understand. Your words are so meaningful and really put a great feeling in my heart. Your brillant my dear :) Can't wait for your next masterpiece. Nik