Boundary.

Your poem expresses what many of us feel today and you have explained it so well. I feel like nothing should be changed as you have truly portrayed your need for that freedom, to go past the boundry line and fly away from hurt and shame. A deep and meaningful work of art, nicely done.

~MaryAnne

I sit here.
Behind the glass,
with a view so perfect
of a world so harmed.

*I'd maybe change "the" to "thick" that way the image of the glass you're behind is better. But I love what you are saying here. It's sad how clearly we can see destruction. I liked that this one was short. Every line had a purpose and added something else to the story you were telling. Sad but so true. Winderful job here hun. You're amazing :) Keep writing. Nik*

Life thros obsticles at us at times but it's always good to know that people overcome them. Seems like you were talking about that wall, maybe I'm wrong. Perfect flow as always. 5/5, Em x

Glad to be here :)
Thank you for you wonderful comment, and it's awesome that you understood it bang on :)

This was amazing, what I got out of this poem was how at times there like a wall up and with that in the way it takes away all the freedom and everything we wish or want to do in life.. but with that there it's like a roadblock for us in pursuing our wishes. Loved this, well done and welcome to the site. (: