by Brenda Sep 13, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The forecast is predicting thunderstorms. |
by Splashley
Very good. Love it(: 5/5 |
I dont care how it's written. poems are written to make other people feel good, or anyhting like that. you write how it makes you feel at the moment you write it, i really enjoyed reading it. thought you did a fantastic job. |
by Em
I like the words you use to describe your heartache. 5/5, Em |
by Mikaela DLC
Nicely written!!! |
I like how you incorporated something as simple as a thunder storm into a persons lfe, as they always say, calm before the storm, and you showed that well here. Nice job |