by LitxUpxWithxLife Sep 14, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
**This is my first obscure poem. It is just a random collection of thought and emotion. Please feel free to critique and comment :-)** |
by Midnight Sun
Wow, I truly love the line "Solitude's feminine caress chills me to the bone." It's very descriptive and I love when inanimate things are personified. Really beautiful. The only advice I have is to focus your thoughts more...make it more directed to one subject. Other than that, awesome. Still giving you a 5/5 :) |