by Second to None Sep 14, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Please don't be sad. I couldn't do this anymore. I couldn't live like this anymore. All this pain was just kicking down my door. When you read this I'll be bleeding on the floor. Don't forget the good times we had. Once again, please don't be sad. I know you didn't see this coming. And don't blame this on yourself. It is all my fault for not being strong enough. Please know that i love you sis. Your probably the one who found me. And mom, we had our ups and downs but i know deep deep down you really cared. And dad, you can *%$# off. This is how it was meant to be and in the end you won't miss me. |
This is a very sad pome, but it was very well wirtten. i think you should break it up in stanzas, but that up to you, i know that notes arent written in stanzas but it would make it easier to read. Just a thought... but well done |