Honesty and simplicity is the key word in this poem. Loved the way it moves on and take you to the fairy land.

Writing a collab with two talented people is an opportunity i am sure many people on this site would be praying for. It surely was a great experience.
It surely was a great pleasure, thank you

all the best and take care

Real nice

A collab with 2 people is difficult but three is almost impossible but this is seamless and as it should be, can't really tell who wrote which lines. A love poem of memories of meeting the first love, nice. Well done to all of you.

Cindy you & the others did a very good job
weaving this love poem :) Well done & keep
that pen busy!
Take care :)

Beautiful! I love it! The three of you have written such beautiful words about an everlasting moment... I love how a simple school dance can be transformed into something as beautiful as this. Great job!! You deserve to win this contest :)

When great and tallented minds come together a masterpiece such as this is formed.
You all did an awesome job with this beautiful piece.Avery much enjoyed read.Hoping to read many more beautiful colabs by the three of you.
Great job.
paul...