This is one magical piece. Its like reading the book of dreams, you make it so easy to travel with your simple words.

Just loved it

all the best and take care

More of a story than a poem but nonetheless it is a good one. Sad but your memories a special day with the one you love. Well done.

A beautiful piece.... full of love and special memories. Loved it Cindy. Very touching, Lol.

This poem holds a dear place in your heart
I'm sure and it fills the reader with warm love
as well as sadness..touching write.
Take care

Well done and I enjoyed reading it
Sad, beautiful, many emotions within each word.

I loved it! You know... this made me sad but again I'm happy to see the power of love. This is what made you write the poem. Absolutely wonderful.

This beautiful poem pulled me into the sad dreamy scene that you have painted. The death of a loved one is a bitter cross to bear. Is this based on a true event in your life?

So descriptive and emotional. Very touching and VERY well written Cindy

To walk down memory lane and retrace those step we once took with the one we love can bring peace to our soul in many ways.And though they may be gone the little keepsakes of the heart will remain forever.
A beautiful write Cindy.An enjoyable read.
Paul...

A nice touching write and it fits well with the others you have penned. they are always filled with true emotion. May your elm live long and prosper where the initals of your love grow old.