by Saving Grace
Woah. Verrry relatable piece. Easy to understand. I actually reallly liked this poem, its simple, but discriptive. Keep it up. 5/5 |
I like how this was written, it flowed perfectly and i could see the imangery in the words. but is the last sentance supposed to say "doing so doing so well" maybe just "doing so well" would make the last stanza flow better |
Excellent poem. Short yet says a lot, speaks of so much in so little words, well written, beautiful real emotion in every word. |
by kelleyana
This is unique, i love it. Very well done, 5/5, kel. |
by victoria
I understand this completely. wearing a mask just to get through the day. love how short it is but yet it tells so much more. |