I like the flow throughout the poem, i think it was very well written. I especially like the ending, it put alittle bit of humor in a sad poem. Well done

Very good flow and well written. 5/5

This was ok but i didn't feel the emotion. It was indeed a sad write. Well done 4/5, kel.

Hmmm. Very dark and emotional write. I would agree with Luna Blue though; it sounds more that of hate than sadness. But poetry is expression, and you did a good job with that. Also, the flow could not be touchd. So I say that this deserves a 5/5.