Omg girl these poems don't fit you. Its far from it, & I hope its not true or that you currently hold the emotion that was portrayed here. This was extremely deep and overflowed with sadness. Show me some pink love poems that make me smile... now that would be beautiful. Aside from all of what I said though, this was a simple but to the point poem of which was written well based on the form. You seem to love the Cinquain (:

Short but very, very powerful and original. 5/5, Em