Comments : Dying Dreams

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    The ending really summed it up: nice work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hologram

    I don't think yu understand just how much yu mean to me, please please please don't leave me.
    It was a good poem n all but just know I love yu and live, atleast for me, okay ..

    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Hologram

    I don't think yu understand just how much yu mean to me, please please please don't leave me.
    It was a good poem n all but just know I love yu and live, atleast for me, okay ..

    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Hologram

    I don't think yu understand just how much yu mean to me, please please please don't leave me.
    It was a good poem n all but just know I love yu and live, atleast for me, okay ..

    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Hologram

    I don't think yu understand just how much yu mean to me, please please please don't leave me.
    It was a good poem n all but just know I love yu and live, atleast for me, okay ..

    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Another great write, you write with so much emotion, its really great. Your ending was especially great, it finished it perfectly. Its a really sad poem, but you wrote it really well. Well done, again. 5/5