Unworthy of Title.

by Natalie   Sep 15, 2009


Heartbreak is the deepest felt emotion.

You will never be aware of how much I have wanted you.

I have experienced forever too many times and watched it disintegrate before my eyes.

Forever; a notion that came to live every time I looked into those eyes. Eyes that stole my breathe and halted time. With each blink came the shocking realisation of a lifeless world.

I loved you violently. Grabbed at this love with clawing nails futilely as I watched it slither away. Have you any idea of how painful it is to lose repeatedly?

And so I bow my head, eager heart crucified by your own enthusiasm. Who was I to dream of dreams that had once before turned to nightmares?

Thus crumbles the heart that was never whole.

©Natalie M. Sarantos 19/03/09

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem made me go awwwwwwwwww. It is written very maturely but still you can see the emotion in it. I loved the opening lines

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Great job! the vocabulary was good. keep up the greta work! rrc mine? "unrecognizable"

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    I think that this was an excellent write. It had no rhyme scheme...really no format; but at the same time it said so much. Your choice of vocabulary and voice really set this off for me. Amazing and beautifully written fellow poet. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Daniel Milano

    I love the idea's you expressed in this poem, Great writing... keep it up natalie.
    From, Daniel

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