I love the idea's you expressed in this poem, Great writing... keep it up natalie.
From, Daniel

I think that this was an excellent write. It had no rhyme scheme...really no format; but at the same time it said so much. Your choice of vocabulary and voice really set this off for me. Amazing and beautifully written fellow poet. 5/5

Great job! the vocabulary was good. keep up the greta work! rrc mine? "unrecognizable"

This poem made me go awwwwwwwwww. It is written very maturely but still you can see the emotion in it. I loved the opening lines

5/5