Hey this is the best peice of poetry I have read all week! You did an amazing job with the imagery eh. I loved how you compared your pain with that of a storm. It was so dark and so emotional, it said so much. Beautifully written 5/5

This is an amazing piece, I wish I had found it a while back because I could not only say it is beautiful even with the darkness within but it is also something I feel I could relate to in a way. Anyway, I agree that the imagery is great and they style was a unique twist on something so common. Awesome piece :)