by Daniel Milano Sep 16, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Some people fear to lose, |
You have taken an old idea and made it fresh and new. It depicts all that is in love, the searching, beginning and end. Well done great flow. |
I like it so much , it ex precess every bit of love for someone you truely love. |
by Joyous
You know Daniel ... I smile when I read your poem haha! I don't know why but I just feel so lovely and so in love like a child when I read your poem. Your poem is romantic and bring a sweet smell in a childish way that make people feel so in love haha! you know love is childish ^^ so its a great poem! I like it! Hope to see more poem from you! |
by katie
Awesome poem! Great flow! 5/5 |
I love your peom.. |