Comments : But a drop in the sea

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    That is the kind of attitude that perhaps we should all adopt. Good Job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    I'm not the kind of woman.
    Who is lost without a man.
    My life won't end if you leave.
    I have dreams and goals and plans.

    ^^ very strong write... just shows the inner strength and confidance you have within... theres power in each line... command that you have on yourself...
    very well expressed write :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Ha.... A great write! I loved it. Made me smile:) You definately got your point across.... Well done!

    Loved these lines.....

    "It's just that it's time for me to take care of myself.
    And love me more than i love you. "

    Well said , Lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Nobody is ever irreplaceable. More often that not somebody better comes along, 5/5. Em