My love of the ocean has only been reinforced after reading this. Your words create such vivid images that will be in my mind's eye for the rest of the day. Welcome to the site. Awesome poem for the first one.

As the people above me said this is a very beautiful poem. Your words are so soft and sweet and they paint such a lovely picture. I think the way you wrote this was very creative and I loved this from start to finish. Amazing work dear. Nik :)

Beautifully penned...
Ocean,
Fury rages within your dark, vast waters
We cannot tear our eyes away.

^^ the fury of oceans so well described... I love watching the ocean when it rains :)

Feel!
The rain drenching your skin, your clothes clinging to your body
The wet sand clutches the bottom of your feet, its only haven from the violence
The spray of the waves whipping against your skin,
As your heart breaks from the sight before you

^^just loved the feel of it... lovely imagery :)

Well penned...

Such a unique style, flow, rhyme and write. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. Written with alot of thought and strangely alot of emotion. I could just see and hear the ocean just with this poem. Well done, 5/5. Em