by Alicia
I loved your poem! It was really intense... I especially liked the stanza... |
by Clown
Beautifully written, I can feel the guilt and self hatred. It made me feel angry at myself, I loved it, and if its based on fact, then I do feel sorry for you, cheating is a horrible thing, but you can change, so dont let yourself down, just pick yourself up and say leason lerned, Il never do that again |
Sounds more like " I hate myself poem" than a "Sad poem", anyways, I always believe that any release is a beautiful release and this is beautiful, despite the angst, hate, anger and etc. etc so on and so forth :) |