Waterfall

by Samantha   Sep 18, 2009


What a beautiful waterfall
Water running down
Such a beautiful waterfall
With mysterious creatures around
I saw something run
I followed for fun
Behind the waterfall we go
Such a nice gentle flow
I see a girl
Shes prettier than a pearl

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  • 15 years ago

    by Samantha

    Thankyou :) i prefer the truth and to be honest i hate this poem lol! i made it when i was trying to think happy thoughts and plus when i wqrote it i was 12 lols

  • 15 years ago

    by LenaLee

    Sweet :)
    It's cheesy but effective, but the rhyming? It was kind of awkward.
    Still, I liked it very much. I love the repetition of "waterfall", but I found it just wasn't effective enough. Sorry if you don't appreciate criticism, but that's just what I think. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Wonderful but it doesn't seem finished. What was this girl that looked like a pearl doing near the waterfall and where did the creature go? Good job though, 5/5. Em x

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