Wonderful but it doesn't seem finished. What was this girl that looked like a pearl doing near the waterfall and where did the creature go? Good job though, 5/5. Em x

Sweet :)
It's cheesy but effective, but the rhyming? It was kind of awkward.
Still, I liked it very much. I love the repetition of "waterfall", but I found it just wasn't effective enough. Sorry if you don't appreciate criticism, but that's just what I think. :)

Thankyou :) i prefer the truth and to be honest i hate this poem lol! i made it when i was trying to think happy thoughts and plus when i wqrote it i was 12 lols