Comments : Twilight Masterpiece

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A masterpiece of images regardless of the time of day. Vibrant and subdued colors, a sense of peace and solitude. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A great color spectrum of images. Your wording is well done , brilliantly put together. Good work Raj

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Picture painting imagery. I loved your word choice. Nice job!

  • 15 years ago

    by AwingAshes

    I admire your masterpiece.
    So beautiful, very expressive and truly does paint a picture.

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A very descriptive, colorful, beautiful write. Wow the imagery in this one was absolutely gorgeous. You painted an awesome picture for us readers. Awesome. :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I just adore this piece about nature. Your
    choice of words just brings it all alive that we
    as readers can see..excellen write!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    Another beautiful poem :)

    As morning fragrance seep through, yawning summer-borne streets,
    Will you halt for a while and admire my masterpiece?

    I loved the imagery in this piece. It brought such a picture of beauty to my mind :) I felt that I was standing there admiring what your words had painted.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Rocky

    From what i have read of your other poems you do really have a talent with imagery using only a few words. and this poem is no exception. i really did like "Sprinkling crystal shimmer,on silky strands of Maize,". this was an excelent poem

  • 15 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    One of the most beautiful, descriptive twilight poem's I've ever read. This poem is a brilliant painting of the twilight, one of my favorite times of day. Awesome!

    5/5