Very well written. Tha rhyme of tha poem flowed rely well. 5/5

I think you should work more on structure. The flow was a bit choppy. You had the rhyming down okay, I really liked how you rhymed nightmare with hair, that was a sweet sort of line. It just needs to have a little more structure to make it more enjoyable to read.

Good rhyming good poem i like it 5/5