His Last Words

by lovemehateme   Sep 19, 2009


The pain your feeling is because of me, I put you through so much yet I just cant see.

I cant see the good thing I had right in front of me but of course I had to let you go, the reason why is something that I dont even know.

I only know of how stupid I was for hurting you like I did for breaking you down wasnt my intention at all, I wanted to be the one to catch you when you fall.

Thats all over now because your gone, so now as much as I want to I cant move on.

I cant move on because I knew in my heart that you were the one for me, but now tears in your eyes is all I can see.

Tears from a broken heart and one that will never be replaced, cutts on my arms from the pain I caused you are slowly being carved into my skin for hurting you is something I have to face.

I should of listened when you told me that you loved me, I should of listened when you said that we were meant to be, your last words were "forever and ever, I Love You Baby".

[[cant decide if I wana add more to it or keep it tha way it is... comment on it anyway plzz and let me no wat youu think]]

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    This is such a sad piece but I assure you it doesn't need to be changed, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Aww Codi :( this was sad hun. I wanna happy poem from you. I know you can do it. Keep your head up sweetie :) Nik

  • 15 years ago

    by heartless

    I love it. Great job. I think this maybe the one thing that has made me smile tonight because its what i'm going through right now.

  • 15 years ago

    by miracle

    Babe its perfect you dont need to add. honest. its beautiful. ive been ther hon things get better promise...i love this im faving this...beautifuly painful...
    5/5