I love it! I can truly relate to this poem! I really get you because I hate it when I fight with someone I care about and when I try to help them and make things right they refuse to let me and just want to argue. You talk about feelings of hurt and you portrayed your feelings really well in this poem. Great job!

"Beyond the moon and stars
you can hear me shout
HEAR ME OUT
HEAR ME OUT"
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I love the repetition! It really makes a statement. ;)