I absolutely love the flow of this poem. I can relate to most things you have mentioned and wrote about in this poem.

Particularly love this stanza:

It was the fear of giving up;
of hearing my conscience say
"you're a failure, leave and let
your faith slip away"

Just triggers something to me. Really nice write 5/5

The flow was particularly my favorite thing about this poem. Second was the topic. You showed how losing a loved one can wreck you in so many different ways and effect different things. Loved it. But the emotion wasnt as clear as it could have been. 4/5

Really enjoyed reading this poem, speaks alot of truth about losing a loved one. You should never go back where you've been coz it will never be the same and you portrayed this well. I like the line "I thought if I believed in myself
everything must go right" this is so true. If you believe in yourself then so will others. Well written, great job. 5/5. Em