Florentinised Verse

by ADEL   Sep 20, 2009


The gardens in you bloom like fate

each herb is a slave before your gate

and when the buds in lights are born

shine the roses to your night and morn

to touch and kiss the sins we share

of rooting virtues and passion bare.

And when the seasons are done and gone

and every tear is left and torn

run the rivers to salute and greet

the singing tread down your feet

and every sea is a pearl in your eyes

and your eyes are your songs complete.

And far from the gods that swore

and closed the repentance at every door

open you a mercy wide and vast

and a pleasure worthy to implore

that love in every now and last

sinks in your bones and cores.

( C ) Copyright 2009 ADEL ATTIYEH

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  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a beautiful essence in your love
    poem it makes the heart sigh with warmth..
    a lovely read :)

  • 15 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Aw.. it was so beautiful and cute :). She is very lucky to have you by her side; one thing is being an amazing person, and another, having someone so near that sees it and reminds it to you so beautifully. Great work on this, very touching, keep it up!
    Take care,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow...this was so beautiful. Such a lovely write. I felt so much love in this. Amazing job. Nik

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    What the girls said :) lol

    good poem for someone you care about. Good wording good rhyme.

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    What a beautiful write. Very touching and full of love from one's heart. You have impressive rhyming skills lol.. better than anything I could ever write :] Well done!

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