There's Always Someone Better Around The Corner..So Don't Worry
15 years ago
by Em
I really like this stanza ...
"Butterflies in my tummy
Voices in my head
pretending I don't love you
is the biggest lie I've said" such an emotional stanza. I liked how you kept the flow, rhyme and stlye throughout, so much thought and emotion. I liked the ending, very powerful. The only hitch is in the penultimate stanza u spell **surely** ... "shurely" other than that beautiful written poem Very good job, 5/5. Em