by Black Heart Still Beating Sep 20, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Do you see the way I stair, |
by Rihanna
This is amazging I love it sweetie(: |
by H. Elizabeth
I love your writing. all of it. keep up the great work... |
Aye-May-Zing 5/5 |
Try not to cut the sentences too much. it made perfect sense. i liked it. but you can improve the lines a bit ok. |
by Jackie
Different format for a poem, but it works. Very good poem, 5/5 |