by Michael D Nalley Sep 21, 2009
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
We gazed at the orange sunset while we were still friends |
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This poem is perfect in many ways, it speaks the truth to what people really love or believe in. The rainbow to me symbolizes an illusion that most people believe to be worth something in the long run. Chasing after something they could never catch, sometimes we just need to stop and take a second to appreciate the simple things in life. Great job |
by kelleyana
Very well done this poem. This poem is definately my style and it was a pleasure to read such a beautiful one from you. 5/5, kel. |
by Broken Masquerade
I loved the imagery in this. The use of colours was really effective. It flowed well and the rhyming was simple, but worked. I'm not normally into these type of poems but this one was good :) Well done, 5/5 :) |
I liked the fact that you put your own experience into this and used a rhyming scheme that i don't see alot. Maybe shortening the lines would go much better, but all the same, it was a job well done |