I really enjoyed this poem, the use of colours was really , really well written into the poem. The orange sunset at the start of the poem and the first stanza gave it a sentimental yet hopefull feeling that i can't really explain. and the poem took you on a journey till the darkness and lack of colour in the final stanza. I'm really glad i read this. As with all your poems i have read when i'm finished i'm left with something that keeps me thinking about what i've just read for a long time.

I love how you incorporated something so simple as the colors of the rainbow into something so beautifuly written! The imagery was flawless! Great job

I liked the fact that you put your own experience into this and used a rhyming scheme that i don't see alot. Maybe shortening the lines would go much better, but all the same, it was a job well done
4/5

I loved the imagery in this. The use of colours was really effective. It flowed well and the rhyming was simple, but worked. I'm not normally into these type of poems but this one was good :) Well done, 5/5 :)

Very well done this poem. This poem is definately my style and it was a pleasure to read such a beautiful one from you. 5/5, kel.

This poem is perfect in many ways, it speaks the truth to what people really love or believe in. The rainbow to me symbolizes an illusion that most people believe to be worth something in the long run. Chasing after something they could never catch, sometimes we just need to stop and take a second to appreciate the simple things in life. Great job

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