There's nothing to lament
With dry eyes that cannot weep
They stay forever open
Whilst others' eyes fall to sleep

*I LOVE!!! this stanza. It's perfect. Omg I loved how you wrote this. I haven't written a rhyming poem in a long time and this one makes me want to start again. This was such a sad and emotional piece hun. I can really feel your sadness and how alone you feel in every word and that it truly a talent. I love the simple rhyme and the flow was amazing. I can really relate to what you're saying. Great work dear :) Nik *

This poem stirred a lot of emotion in me and I loved the style, word chioce, and metaphors

Well done

Really well written
Fantastic as Always.

KIU

Wow that is very deep and such a meaningful poem. I've not been on this site for a while now and this is the first poem I've read for a long long time! My favorite stanza is:

There's nothing to lament
With dry eyes that cannot weep
They stay forever open
Whilst others' eyes fall to sleep

It made sense to me and I dont know it's very dark and filled with emotions but my favorite line is one in stanza 3 about the stiches that make you smile. It creats such a good image to the reader!!
Well done.
x