Comments : Thud

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Silent cries in the deph of the night
    waiting for her soul to come back to life
    slowly sinking and losing her breath
    gracefully welcoming that thing called death
    *Very powerful start. Just goes to show what depression feels like.*
    come to me my angel
    she sings
    let me fly on the back of your beautiful wings
    take me from this awful place
    please dont let me fall from grace -
    all because of one stupid mistake
    *Flawless stanza.*
    she turns to her window and starts to pray
    silently wishing never to see another day
    the stars lingering in the sky
    asif to welcome her to their side
    *This is what I did when I was depressed.*

    like a souless corpse
    she closes the door
    a few seconds later....
    a thud on the floor.

    ~ when hearts break ~
    *Very powerful, emotional ending. 5/5. Em*