You drew a very vivid picture, MaryAnne..well done!

Just this stanza:
Vibrant drums echo around,
Addressing the coming of war,
Speaking with a voice profound,
As warnings they outpour.

^^

The rhyming in the last line seemed a little forced.

But you did a good job with this, good wording, imagery, yes, good job!

God bless:)

5/5 Ingrid

Wow this was absoultely amazing. Interesting how anything can inspire us these days to write a poem. This was absolutely excellent, no words really to say to this one. I did in particular love the line about the summer sky burning, that was really good in my eyes. Well done, hope you did well on your assignment. :]

I REALLY like this poem. You did a wonderful job with creativity, trust me!

"Infuriated cannons shout,
Unleashing their opinion,
I hide with utmost doubt,
Running from dominion."
^
I don't know why the rhyme here seemed to good to the ear, it came out so beautifully. Well done!

"I taste remains of vast fires,
As the summer sky does burn,
I asphyxiate from what expires,
While I am choked with concern."
^
My fave stanza here :) I love the first line, it was profound. And it seemed dark more than sad.

Well done =)
Write on.

P.S I've been reading your poems but I'll give you some comments later on..for now just keep the inspiration alive ;)