Freedom Bound

Thank you for all your comments!

'Fountain streams up to the sky
Drowns my past as waters swirl
Memories go drifting by.'
- - Awesome metaphor here, although some may see it as simple it is excellent. I really loved this

Awesome write overall. A simple poem about gaining freedom and a new life. A new beginning. Putting the past behind you and moving forward. Well done!

Thats a wonderful take on life... leaving behind the past and moving towards new horizon of hope... radiates just positive feeling ...

Images that were my past
Oppressively, my mind, they'd rake
To the waves, like stones, I cast
And watch them sink below this lake.

^^ just loved the imagery here... of the past sinking below... loved it :)

wonderful write...

Thanks for all your comments. Was sitting in a tranquil park by a pond while watching a fountain, and then felt a profound change in my life; a new hopeful beginning!

Randy
I'm so happy knowing you are back where you wanted to be :) The poen is beautiful.
Excellent!
Take care
Cindy