This is a powerful poem although it's not one of your favourites I find the message behind this piece so applicable to so many people! Especially myself! My past relationships have been a series of being cheated on because I couldn't change who I was for them but the main message which you have clearly woven throughout each stanza of this poem apart from pain and betrayal is also strength. The strength in realising that it is the true you that counts not what others want you to be! Any guy that is worth your time will love you for you and not want you to be someone else!

I really enjoyed reading this poem!
Thank you for sharing
5.5 from me

You shouldn't have to change for anyone in your life at all. This was a great poem to get your feelings out though. If you are truly unhappy with anyone though you should be honest no matter what!. No relationship is perfect and I doubt you were ever the one to blame but its hard when you can't forgive yourself. Hurtful words are so hard to overcome. When you have been made to feel worthless you dont believe on yourself and negative thongs will enhance these feelings.

You should never beg for forgiveness if it is never your fault. This person is angry and it sounds like it might be at themselves. I hate when people are like thos. They always blame others for there problems. It sounds like it would be over between you two at the time this happened. If he is talking to another girl. I am sorry you had your heart hurt. Life is so not fair at times.

Love is a tough thing to fall for. It's difficult when they are not honest with you at all. And when they fall out oflove with you its like you feel life is over. IIt's truly not though. Its hearybreaking but you will stay strong. You said it best all you can be is yourself. No matter what don't change for anyone. I love how you got your feelings out here though. Its amazing how people can overcome anything with time and friends. 5/5