by Stephanie Sep 24, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
You can't make it feel right when you know that it's wrong... I stood uplifted, then broken down with shame. The thunder couldn't handle my screams, yet that loud rain overpowered my tears. Glass scatters on top of the memories, and I see your face in every old photograph it seems. |
by kelleyana
This is my favorite stanza"The urge to give up still lingers. It lingers like the scent of a lover. Hovering over me, taunting me, saying all the right words. And with each day that passes, and the anxiety that pushes my limit, I fall deeper into those words. Reality can't touch me; I've been lost in these dreams and nightmares for way too long". This is really brilliant. I like the mataphors. Well done, kel. |