OMG, I really enjoyed reading this poem. Such a unique yet very touching. I love the whole of the poem but the best bits were the start and end. "Dreams of yesterday still lapse ashore
Like salt in the wounds
For some reason I keep coming back for more" - wonderful start, showing how touched you were from what happened but now the wounds are like rubbing salt into them.
"You are forever in my heart
Forever existent " - Flawless!!! Good job, 5/5. Em