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by kaylajoyx3 Sep 25, 2009 category : Dark, fantasy / other
The cradle of a budding utopia Remaining signs of life are twisted My mind wreaks havoc As my hands smear blood everywhere Like a philosophical asylum No way out, unless treatment fends Screams fall in sync with midnight dreams Dreams of life that still wash ashore My captains dead Insanity is omnipotent I avert my eyes from the city From where I know everyone dies beneath the rubble I question my existence I desecrated everything that I love My soul and the city remain With one misstep I will drown For some reason I know there is a continuation for my soul Claustrophobia creeps up And I give in I can't find a way out of my head
by Em
Such a deep, dark, emotional poem. I loved this stanza - "I question my existence I desecrated everything that I love My soul and the city remain With one misstep I will drown." Flawless poem, 5/5. Em