How lovely. Love this line. ^ Because we are one soul dwelling in two bodies. That's how a true love should be. Well done.

A lovely write! Very nicely written, and expressed :) Yes... I loved this part too...

"Because we are one soul dwelling in two bodies.
For you are me, and i am you. "

..... it just ended it beautifully!

Well done Walah!

I must say that this was a lovely read. The emotions were so true and evident that it came straight from the heart. My only advice would be to limit your punctuation, you don't need a period after every single line since a majority of them are continuations from the previous line.

Other than that small minor detail, this was a fantastic write. Keep up the excellent work.

Peace, Joe

Perfect, 5/5. Em