You are very talented. I can really relate to this poem. Great job.
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I love ur poem Mariah . fantastic job 5/5
keep it up :)

I'm an honest kind of soul, and as so, I have to say, that though I did like it, it wasn't great. The opening to couplets were great. Brilliantly simple and elegant. If the next six lines were as good, this, in my most humble opinion, would have been a certain 5/5.

I think, at least the last couplet should've been as strong as the first. The opening and closing stanzas should always be strong.

Hope I didn't offend you. If I did, I apologise.

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote on all the poems you read.