I appreciated the use of description to hook the reader and cause them to want more. The whole poem actually contained quite a bit of descriptions.

The rhyming seemed a bit sketchy at times and almost forced. However, the rhythm and flow maintained an even pace avoiding any hiccoughs or skips in beat.

Lastly the last stanza really wrapped up the poem and provided a chilling description of your pain.
"So many wounds; left in me.
all of them listening to only.. you."
Truly sent shivers down my spine because it nailed how it really feels to be in pain. Wonderful write with great utilization of details and description.

Goodbye is one of the worst things to say especailly to somebody we loved, 5/5. Em