Aww... you write about a relatable issue and I know it really hurts! But at least you get inspired to write good poetry such as this. Well done :)

I can really understand where you're coming from here. I like how you said, "But if you were, we wouldn't be apart like this." I think you mean, if he really cared, he would be there for you. I am really sorry you feel this way and I hope you work things out. I like how mention have happy days, sad days, love and hate. Extreme different emotions, but so easily brought up. Very good poem - Kayla