Overall i think its quite a good poem,
the way you use to tell him/her what happend is gentle yet pressing.

I like the way you made everything rhyme, but sometimes it made the poem flow unnaturally.
also if you change "my heart will help you be set free" to "my heart will help set you free" it would sound a lot better. but it's your poem so please feel free to ignore my suggestion.

nonetheless it's a good poem and since I can't give you a 4.5 I'll give you a 5.
keep writing.

kind regards max