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by morgan Sep 29, 2009 category : Love, romance / lost love
Walking along these broken steps I see a broken tree I don't know why it thought this But it made me think of meThe tree, broken down but beautiful Reminded me of my heart And how it had been From the very startIt's extremely loving nature But as tough as its bark It's hard to see Behind the bark that hides my heartBut when you look behind the bark You see the beauty with in You no longer see the tears But the real me that hides with inWhen I was walking away from the tree I found a way for the real me to be When i was walking on those broken steps My broken dreams faded from me*I didn't exactly know where to put this, but i hope you like it anyway. Thanks for reading. haha lol*
by Faith Ann
Another good poem =D
by Em
I love how you refer to your heart as a tre, unique and beautiful poem. 5/5, Em
by robs
Good job i liked how you compared your heart to the broken tree and how it was broken but still stood beatiful =] good job again