by stefanie Sep 30, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I've been hurt before |
by Hollymariee
This is very heart-felt , pooring emotion . I know how you felt . It is a bit long , and some of the stanzas really throw off the flow where others don't necessarily need to be there . I would go over it and do a syllable count, change up some words and fix the flow. Really well done though , 5/5 . |