I am sorry to hear about your friend's father
& I pray that she finds the strength to hang
in there...take care.

Great poem love it and I so relate I lost my dad to cancer a few months ago so I know the hurt ur friend feels as she lost her dad. 5/5

Tammi.

It's a wonderful, heartfelt, and well written poem for your friend.

Kay
What a beautiful heart touching piece you have penned to help your friend. This really brings tears to the eyes.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

This is a very sad yet uplifting poem.I pray that your friend will find some solace in it.
I also pray that the Lord will give her a little of his peace and strength as she grieve's her dad's death.
Well done tribute.
Paul...

A very beautiful poem, and well written too. The emotions were so strong.

I could feel the sadness you feel for your friend, but also, the happiness you want for her.

Wonderful write! 5/5

p.s. Thank you for for comment. I really apreciate it.

mandy :)

The ones left behind have such a hard time coping with suicide...there are really no words to comfort them, but you did a fine job anyway, Kay.

Only time can make the wouds hurt less, but the scare will always remain, becuase it was a deliberate deed and not caused by fate.

Very impressive and tasteful poetry:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid
ps: what to think of those little people, even dense enough to downvote a poem as moving and close to the heart as this, eh?

Well it's sad that, such incident happened. Well no doubt, that this a very uplifting poem, to remember her dad. I can fell the strength of pulling through the sorrow in this poem. I love how you ended the poem. It's certainly is true, that his love never dies