Oh dear...its a hard process to heal when you
lose a child but to kill the child already in the
womb..a heart breaking write..

A touchy subject but you have used very powerful words to give the reader vivid images, ones that I won't soon forget. Well done.

I agree with the other comments, I wasnt expecting the ending to be what it was. I was reading the poem with a totally different interpretation and understanding, but the end made everything much clearer. Sad write, but it happens in life today unfortunetly.

I was not expecting the ending, and honestly, i like how you tied the poem together the way you did. Its a very sad topic, but i like how you said it... nice job!

When we denie a soul entrance to this world it is indeed the ultimate betrayal.

This poem is written with good taste and class....it worded my feelings on this subject to a tee and I am glad to know there are more people in this world who feel the same.

Bravo, girl!

5/5 Ingrid

That was beautiful.

Your choice of format only made it stronger.
Awesome poem.

This is heart breaking, such powerful words. I am totally against abortion, except in certain cases, but that's my personal point-a- view. Yes abortion should applies for rape victims, or health issues but apart from that, I think today ladies has so much choices not become pregnant and more over if our male partners loves us as he pretends, why think family planning concerns only females? Men who loves their women, protect them not just from dangers but from enduring all those pain. So too bad today that some women deliberately got pregnant with the intention that it's easy, they will abort it.

Very well done on such a delicate subject, 5/5, kel.

Raj
Again your words have moved me. What a poem.
You did awesome dear.
Love Cindy