I Took A Walk Outside Today...

by Dreamofolwin   Sep 30, 2009


I took a walk outside today...
To smell the fresh sweet air.
I took a walk outside today,
To free my heart from care.

For life is full of trials...
That can burden our heart and mind.
When we're seeking for all the answers,
That sometimes we cannot find.

Yes, I took a walk outside today...
BREATHED IN the morning air!
And my worries, seemed to fade away,
For a moment I hadn't a care!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful, we all have to do this atleast once in our lifes because things are never easy. Perfect, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin
    Sometimes something as simple as a walk can really lift the spirits.

    I took a walk outside today...
    To smell the fresh sweet air.
    I took a walk outside today,
    To free my heart from care

    I still can shut my eyes and remember doing this :)
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by groovydude

    Sweet ! I will have to remember this next time i`m stressed. nice write

  • 15 years ago

    by anand singh

    My friend, worry is a burden God doesn't want us to bear.So when you took that walk outside and breathe that fresh air, it's him who are saying, do not worry my child for I am in control.He takes away all fears and worries.
    Another beautiful and well penned piece. An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Kinda nice, what a breath of fresh air will do. Such a simple remedy, for the not so simple ailments in life. Thanks for refreshing the old idea.

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